All Comments on 'Slow Seduction of My Indian Mother Ch. 02'

It's a good story but not up to the standards of the please relive me series but keep em coming and please write an other sequel to please relive me series

You're good at this. Hot story. Maybe he can get his Mom to relax. I hope so.

I found the use of 'my mother' in almost every sentence distracting.

It had already been established what the relationship was, so thereafter 'she' would have been sufficient, except when describing the forbidden thrill of the mother sucking her own son's cock.

Apart from that it was an OK story.

@rufriter - thank for the comments. I will look to not put as many 'my mother's' in next time

@mfhtoor - thanks for the comment. Unfortunately I don't believe there will be another please relieve me

Well then make it worth admiring because you have a greater potential then others

In this series you lacked good build up that's all other Wise a great plot and good writing style

Immense wrting potential from my country...Please continue the story..

Seriously you're just amazing with the stories and the way you describe things in it. You actually full fill the fantasy of many guys. Those Hindi words and all it's great.

Please continue this series and make it more sensual and use little more Indian words(Hindi) if possible.

'Please relieve me' is a fantastic series and one of the best I've read so far it has everything in it.

One request could you please write one story every month cause they're good. Pls write part 3 of this story as soon as possible.

no one can stop with one. if i am mom i wud go back him

great story so far. please write the 3rd part and a bit lengthy one. if possible post it today.

Good adaptation of Velamma first two episodes.

Expecting next chapter anxiously in which we expect to join his father & married elder sister with their muslim driver & adibasi cook.Two divorces & two marriages occur mutually & peacefully in which the aged adibasi cook & the Muslim driver marry the daughter & mother respectively with the help of father, son & son-in-law.

This story was terrific. I look forward to the next chapter and reading every story you've written so far. Keep up the good work. Definitely a fan of your writing.

Why did you stop writing these stories????

Very well written and the build up is perfect. Keep going.

Pls continue!! This is amazing!

Nothing in front of

Please releive me

great work, PLEASE write more chapters!!

This is the exact copy of the Comic Velamma Episode 1. You atleast should have finished the story.

This is an awesome story, we need more chapters, pls continue

Very very hot !!! This story dictates life of indian children and this guy dominating and fucking his strict mother is gonna be hot as hell. I urge you to continue the story with some reluctance and then hard fucking.

Plagiarism at its peak. It is same to same copy of Indian famous adult comic vellama

Why stop?:) this is the best story ever

This is just one of the best. Taking it nice and easy and then just wow. Hoping for more

I wish you would continue this story

Pls!! Continue!!