All Comments on 'Slowdance'

An interesting story told in a fresh way. I actually liked it.

The inner dialog was excellent. A refreshing change from the typical stuff. Looking forward to more.

BTW, you might like "God of Mischief and Lies" by FireFaery. Loki finds something he can't control.

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Very nice. Hope there is a chapter 2 ....

What a great story! Deep characters, sweet delight and a lovely ending. I'd love to see more of Halley and Curtis!

Beautifully written, thanks! 5/5

Great story. Loved uour characters Halley and Curtis. I hope you decide to write more chapters on them. 5stars