All Comments on 'Slowly, And Then All At Once'

by K.A. Ryde

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really sweet.

used2bjustjused2bjustjover 1 year ago

I would have been nice to find out what was the cause behind the nightmare. Good romance though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But all the sex is sooooo rushed.

Go for a marathon, not a sprint.

Three stars.

CharmadilloCharmadilloover 1 year ago

Very sweet story and despite a bit of a slow start (for erotica anyway), very captivating. I liked these two characters from the start and wanted to see where they were going.

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonover 1 year ago

Probably the best execution of this story idea that I have read.

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonover 1 year ago

I thought you might have missed an opportunity to give us more insight into their characters by not writing more about them getting to know each other during the first week.

Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
5 Star Entertainment

What a wonderful and fun exciting story. Great characters and great story telling. Just fun enjoyable entertainment. Well done and thanks for your time to write. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lovely story, beautifully crafted

Rambling_ChantrixRambling_Chantrixover 1 year ago

This was incredibly sweet. The scene by the owl painting stole the show. The rest was also very good. A tired trope somehow given new life is perhaps one of the best signs of talent in writing... thank you for sharing this with us. <3

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusover 1 year ago

My introduction to your work. A sweet story of overcoming inhibitions and reveling in discovery.

nogravynogravyover 1 year ago

Very nice; a sweet story that was interesting, satisfying, and inspiring. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautifully written and imagined, took us there slowly and maintained interest, and my culmination was A1++. I'm male, sometimes watch porn, and the real problem is they always go straight from A to Z without any intervening will it / won't it play or build up.

akeripperakeripperover 1 year ago

as someone born and living in sweden, we like your short description of stockholm.

K.A. RydeK.A. Rydeover 1 year agoAuthor

@akeripper hahaha I'm glad you liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is a keeper. A really cute and horny love story. A rare thing around here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story and helped bring a shy lady out into the world

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very sexy story. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it! very sexy.

Pappasleaze!

MarsPatrolMarsPatrol12 months ago

It was sweet and tender. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story and well written and moving along at just the right pace, but three years from then to now I think deserves at least one more chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very good story. I haven’t been able to stop touching myself.

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