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All Comments on 'Slowly Opening up on Vacation Ch. 01'

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jennyphiljennyphilover 1 year ago

Great start, book the same driver to get the bra in part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A nice beginning to an erotic adventure for Maddie and Jack. I wonder where you are going to take them on your next chapter.

Mr.B

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Down the rabbit hole this writer goes. Next stop cuckoldry and sloppy seconds or thirds and creampies. Good luck cuck writer.

badger_69badger_69over 1 year ago

cant wait for further chapters.

mremrsmremrsover 1 year ago

Great start to an interesting story...looking forward to seeing where this goes...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very enjoyable read with well described sex scenes. Tidying up the grammar would make reading more pleasurable, particularly some of those impossibly long sentences.

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Mid 30s male, attempting to write for the first time. More adventures for Jack and Maddie are in the future as well as a new series so bare with me as I try to finish them. Lots more to come, and as always send me a message if you have any feedback or ideas, I love reading t...