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Click hereSuzy had abandoned all inhibition and had her face buried in Laura's pussy while Laura and Courtney made out furiously. Courtney was going to down on her clit still and Amy just laid beside me and Lizzy, now almost making love instead of fucking, and watched while she caressed our bodies.
"You two are so beautiful together," she said and tilted her head down and kissed Lizzy right on the mouth. I came again deep inside of her. And to think, that was just the first two hours of the slumber party. We still had a lot of fun coming for the rest of the night.
- COMMENTS
Chas1051almost 4 years agoYour "Lizzy" Slumber Party story is excellent. However, you left it with a little bit of a cliffhanger; which had me and my partner, Magi, discussing possibilities. I would like you to provide the next chapter, base on your thoughts and knowledge of the characters.
Please continue the story. Regards, Chase
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoIt was great going until the very end. Lots of good buildup and character development (for an erotic story) and then it was like you got bored writing and decided to just phone in the end. Please consider rewriting the last few paragraphs, because I think you could do the story a lot of justice.
Anonymousabout 6 years agowow we had a cum on the face party. My friend linda won the contest. Her face was completely covered in thick gooey sperm it was in her hair forehead across her lips on her cheeks she never looked so good. Mandy took a load of pics of her face. Linda didn't mind because you could never recognize her. . I can't wait for our next get together. I think it's gonna be on swallowing, I can't wait.
Anonymousover 8 years ago""
"I want to see.. I mean, I dare you to show us your cock," Courtney was completely into this now.
"But Lizzy is here," I cried.
"It's nothing I haven't seen on other boys," Lizzy said.
"Are you sure this is okay?" I asked.
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Why do authors insist on making the guys such wanker ass whiny, whimpy pussies?!
But..but...she'll see my wee wee!! Wah!!
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She was stunning and if she hadn't been my sister I would have done anything to have her. I guess I was about to get my wish.
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Hell, im surprised you havent been sneaking into her room for years!
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Lizzy didn't hesitate, "I dare you to take your shirt off and come and fuck me until you cum."
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Now *THATS* my sister!! Wooo!!!
You know what? Im perfectly happy with them getting busy and jumping right to the good stuff. Gotta remember what era we're in now, lol. ...besides, I hate a long, drawn out game sequence, ugh! I almost skipped it... Went to another story and then came back to be mildly surprised!
AirSearch1almost 9 years agoI'm really looking forward to chapter two, I can hardly wait to see what happens next. And will they continue after the slumber party?
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI came here for genuine Garfeild the cat pornography, and you disapointed me.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoLike others have said, take your time with it. Even if it jumps straight to the fucking like it did, there was still so much more you could have described happening. Keep writing because you have good ideas, just take your time and be a little more descriptive and be patient. It's always best if it happens naturally.
