by watchingyou2
A loving wife story about a... loving wife!
Shame, shame!
Hey, maybe you will inspire some of the other writers and we can redeem the genre.
regards, DJ
Oh, all the clowns who spew vicious invective about slut wife stories but who read them voraciously will hate this one, but that's just too damn bad.
This was a hot piece of sex writing, short, sweet and to the point, well-written and well-edited. Made me hard, which is what good erotica is supposed to do.
All I can say is, rock on!
PS: Any chance of an encore?
I should have treated my fiance the same way. Her mother actually lined her up the first time she cheated on me. I didn't marry the bitch because once she started she couldn't stop.
i liked it and the truth revealed at the end...gave me ideas,might try that
loved it - utterly wicked and nasty. i'd love to be used like that on my wedding night.
I loved that you jumped right into the action! It didn't have slow buildup, but that's why I liked it - hot and dirty, definitely not trite or shallow. Well written smutty erotic fiction!
My husband and I have done this exact thing on several occasions. I bought a couple of old wedding dresses in a thrift store and modified them to be slightly slutty. We take weekend trips to other cities and you wouldn't believe the free stuff hotels throw at you if they think it's your wedding night. We sometimes hit the bar in the dress and a tux and have a few free drinks. There are always guy wanting to kiss the bride.... Heeheee. I love to get carried away and start making out with a cute guy and eventually we ask him up to our room. Guys get so turned on thinking they are fucking a bride before her husband on her wedding night!
OMG, that was a nasty dirty hot story, next chapter please make the talking even more nasty, much more, please turn up the heat to magma explosive, also how about a longer build up too, if possible, 5 stars.
I thought this was gonna be some kind of a Folgers Instant BTB but instead it's a safe, sane and consensual gang bang, WHAT A TWIST!
This story, to me at least, demonstrates the fundamental difference between accepting a cheating spouse and fulfilling a mutual desire... Not because it's his fantasy, but because BOTH OF THEM agreed on and enjoyed it. The third person is a sex toy whose pleasure is a byproduct of the couple's pleasure. COMPLETELY different from one person in a marriage secretly flirting with and going off to fuck someone else by themself, which makes me sad, open marriage or not.