All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 03'

Great action and good description, but the spelling is a tad distracting. "Excited" being the main issue. Other than that, keep up the good work and please don't forget the daughter and dad in all the action.

HI

your third part of slut mommie was perfect

but please

put some sections like fucking in the kitchen and basement while everyones are at home and son force mom

and fuck her very hard while bending her over a table or wall and also fuck her ass while she said NO but he ignire her and force her and finaly she agreed

and mom in these sections wore black stockings and garter belt and skirt and talk dirty and begging for mercy with her cloth disheveled and her son pulling her hair & grab her ass & much moore ...

Specially when his dad or guests are home and son get horny and suddenly

push mom to basement or other rooms and bend her over bed or table and pull her skirt up above her hips and push her black thong to a side and fuck her very hard and good atleast 2 round in one time

and at all many scenes and quickies like these so son fuck her mom any time and any place he wants

and please write the stories longer

go on & GOODLUCK

I just finished reading all three of your stories, and wow. Not only are the stories written well, but the vividness of the scenes are portrayed superbly. The stories really put you inside the mother's mind, and as a male writer, you should be proud at how convincing and effective the style is. Like the others said, some minor editing is in order. If you want someone to do a secondary proofreading, I'm your guy.

Keep writing, and take this story in any direction you prefer. More mother-son action is welcome, but if you decide to write some chapters or a spinoff coming from the father's or daughter's perspective, by all means do so. To sum it up rather appropriately, your stories are hot and extremely enjoyable. Well done.

I agree with So Hot up to a point. If she wants and likes being a slut, have her son completely ban the wearing of bras and panties, ever.

I love the dialog - Very hot and very dirty! Mom sounds like she really loves being a slut! Let's hear a little more about her sexy high heels, too!!

Very exciting. Superb work. Keep going!

I'd like to see the effect on the son of this great sex with Mom: confidence to seduce other mature women -- Mom's friends, sisters, teacher at school.

And of course I hope he gets them pregnant

vargas111@yahoo.com

This story is so damn hot. I love this woman. Can't wait for the daughter to get involved and hey what about another woman [nextdoor neighbour or some such] who discovers them but is so turned on by the thought of Mother and Son fucking that she begs them to let her join in.

Anyway you should do as you like. Just lets have the next part soon.

Thank you!!

This series is soooo hot! I can't wait for the daughter to get involved. Maybe the husband will come back from his trip early and catch the rest of his family in bed and join in, making a hot four-way?

I love having you mom dress sexy. Have her wear nylons, garter belt and high heels under a plaid pleated skirt and take her out and show her off.

I think you forgot to send mummy for a photo shot with the son's friends.I think that would be a great bang to read.looking forward for your next submission.

I don't want to rush genius... but I have been checking everyday for a two months...MORE MORE MORE!!!

why every good story,it get fuck up by sharing.you can go to jail for incest,think writer the more know the more chances you take in going to jail.the sex with mom and son is good by it self.daughter is ready.inmature boy in the driver seat is trouble.

I'm starting to grow concerned about the continuance of this story.

Please tell us that chapter 4's on the way. Its not my intention to rush you, but its not unusual for stories to go unfinished and I'd hate for that to happen here.

You're doing great work. Keep it comin'.

great but when does mother get it in the ass

are you still going to continue this story? if yes, then when will you post it? i hope there's more action where the mom will be so slutty because of lust, and she will finally get it in the ass. the story is hot, I hope you don't leave your readers hanging.

Mom is running amok! God just how repressed would a sweet mommy have to be to fall this low? Pretty fucking repressed I'd guess. I love these kind of fantasies. Here Mom sees just about every human being as a potential orgasm. I keep hearing a famous George Crlin line; 'stop me before I fuck again'! Just how fun is this!

THIS IS BEST FUCKING SERIES EVER!

The level of eroticism in this series just keeps going up and up. Waiting now for Sis to get into the act.

I ONLY WISH I WAS THAT STRANGER, MMMMMM

DI

great story but the misuse of words detracts.

"than" and "then" have completely different meanings....

"exited" is what you do through a door; "excited" is...well you get the idea

utilize an editor, PLEASE :)

in chapter 20

have kristy discover kate jacking off tommy and gina walks up behind

her and talks dirty in her ear while they both watch

or kristy peeks in an open door on gina kate elaine and tommy

and her friend jennifer walks up behind her

I hope that her daughter gets some of her mom soon, and that both her son and daughter fuck her.

Thanks for the read

I think a mother should reserve her cunt for her own boy, in this case Tommy. Tommy's got the energy, enthusiasm, and above all the big stiff prick to keep his mother happy. His mother's twat should be for her own boy only, his big prick and all the creamy semen he's got waiting for his mommy in his hot young balls.

I would like for gina to discover kate's dirty pictures and forces her to do things with her and kristy and tommy but remember voyeurism is the key

i'd like to read about kristy and gina discovering the pictures of kate and discussing them and kristy asking gina do you think they are fucking.

remember voyeurism and incest an unbeatable combination

...please, please, please, use a proof reader. So many missing or disjointed words spoils an otherwise very sexy [dirty] story. But I loved it.

every time (everytime) (2)

night gown (nightgown)

stepped thought he door (through the)

exited (excited)

loosing everything (losing)

sons hand (son’s) (2)

waist band (waistband)

than his fingers sliding (then) (7)

tea shirt (T-shirt)

god (God) (23)

half way (halfway) (2)

(-pair of) black thongs (thong)

rubbed my pussy though my panties (thong)

lifted the g-string (thong)

my bold, moist pussy (bald) (3)

Mother and Son (mother) (son )

be a lone (alone)

hard on ( hard-on)

trans (trance)

peak at my pussy (peek)

on to (onto)

Cumming (cumming)

long lasting (long-lasting)

Mothers (mothers)

yeas (yes

so fucking hot

Now lets see what you can do with KRISTY????,don't forget she has ideas. And it could get hotter, maybe two sluts..... another good read.THANKS

My husband and I love to go out and have him show my body off. He would pick out what he wanted ne to wear. Mostly short skit tank tops high heel shoes. I am 36c 26 38 I have jet black hair long and my nipples are very dark. I am also clean shaven. You could take this part of the story and that's what we had done about a year ago at a bar and grill. I walked out with my tits out for all to see and I loved it. We did not have to run away from people. All my skits are very short and my tank are see thur some are really for men and you can see my side boob a lot.

Thanks keep them going

Will

PS: Will is my hick name giving to me by my husband he said that I will try anything and I won't turn down a dare.

(6/2/2022) Now, this was hot. I just hope she keeps to the "see all you want but don't touch "policy. Watch out, the grammar police are out there taking notes and taking stars. Oh..., that was six years ago, never mind.

5 stars - fantastic, so bloody hot and so slutty.

Great story, I came whist reading the second page .......yipeeee. Now I'm going to masturbate for an hour and fantasize about fucking my mother in new ways - yummmmmmmmmmm

Oh to eat my mom in a bar with people watching. I would probably make her suck that guy too if I knew

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the exhibitionism was a great touch