All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Back in the Business!

First, I need to say how glad I was to see another Slut Mommie story! Your stories really turn up the heat whenever I read them, and this one's no different. Kate really is reaching new heights.

However, girl-on-girl action really isn't the thing for me. It was great, wonderful hot pink lesbian fun, but can we please go back to just Tommy and Kate again? The mother-son connection is the one that REALLY gets me going. And maybe bring Adam in as well for a MMF threesome hah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
some times we go over the top

no common sense,no realist to story.what female married adult wants her pictures on the internet naked with her son.you got something good going here, but be real.you could see the train wreck coming a mile away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GREAT WRITING

You are such a good writer you can tell that you are leading up to Kate having sex with her daughter very soon

and how Gina is going to use tommy to make Kate into more of a slut beacuse Kate really craving tommies cock

Thank You for writing the next chapter wishing for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good to see another Chapter

I enjoyed the chapter. Glad to have another one, but we need to see Kate further down the slut road. Like the path with Gina, would like to see her more controlling of Kate. So many possibilities, you need to just write full time to complete her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great

All (except one) of the chapters were great to me, erotic in the extreme (the only one i didn't care for was the Frank chapter, as i dislike non-consent stories).

I hope the next chapter will finally have mother and daughter going all the way because the girl needs it.

TPF1138TPF1138over 16 years ago
Great

Good to see this one make a come back.

I like where you're taking kate's relationship with Tommy's girlfriend. More of this please.

I'd also like to see some of Tommy's male friends get involved with his Mom, in a less controlling and borderline rape-like fashion than the Frank thing. The other two at the train yard shoot and the pool party should definitely come back.

As always though, you should do whatever you feel compelled to. Its your story. I'm loving it. Keep up the good work.

Cheers!

fantasy69fantasy69over 16 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks to everyone who took the time to leave a comment. Yes, I finally figured out I could post messages here as well, lol. The support of individual e-mails and comments has been outstanding which was probably the only thing that kept me writing. Thanks everyone.

fantasy

workingforthemanworkingforthemanover 16 years ago
more please!

glad to see you picked this back up. great stuff.

badandy917badandy917over 16 years ago
Super Story

I truly love your great story. I is one of the best I have ever read. I just wish it was not so long between chapters but I know it takes time to write. I found your story posted on another site. I don't know if it is from you or a rip-off. If you would like the address, let me know. Keep up the great work.

oddonexoddonexover 16 years ago
Wonderful

I am glad to see the latest chapter in the saga of Slut Mommie. Please write more. I love a mom who enjoys her children and their friends sexually.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hurry Up...

Please hurry up and write the next chapter. Kate with Gina and Tommy, Kate with Kristy, Kate with Jeanine maybe. I can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice to See this series continuing

Not as lengthy and hot as all other chapters were, waiting for the next one

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Simply the best

Just a brief message to say your series is by far and the best I have found on the internet in all my years searching. Please do not give up - more , more more!!!!

AngieFYTREFYTREAngieFYTREFYTREover 16 years ago
Please more sooooon

Another hot chapter, please give us the next soon, please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Please, please please hurry with the next instalment of this series.

DianisDianisalmost 14 years ago
FAAAAAANTASTIC, AM SOOO GLAD THAT GINA JOINED IN THE FROLIC

AND THE GAL-GAL MOMENTS ARE GREAT, LOOKING FORWARD TO READ ABOUT ADAMS COCK AND OF COURSE, THAT LOONG WAITED MOMENT, WITH HER DAUGHTER, MMMMM

DI

dnnkinkdnnkinkalmost 13 years ago
i am swooning!

the seduction is so beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
shit eater

The Author is getting a bit carried away with her arse licking and being a slut to everyone that she has sex with.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE OF THE SAME!!!!

Collage (college)

I though of Raven (thought) (2)

loose their job (lose) (jobs) (2)

loosing (losing)

Bi (bi)

to seemed (seem)

tea shirt (T-shirt)

saying a ward (word)

semi hard (semi-hard)

go ahead (go-ahead)

opened MY MOUTH and took the head of his cock inside MY MOUTH

voice horse (hoarse)

god (God) (19)

Cumming (cumming)

Slut (slut) (33)

Mom (mom) (4)

tippy toes (tiptoes)

be quite (quiet)

stared in owe (awe)

Sluts (sluts)

then (than)

Cuming (cumming) (2)

nipples grading together (grating)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This one has lost me

It's got nothing to do with the incest theme it began with. It probably belongs in one of the other categories by now, as any incest in it is merely incidental at this stage. You've made the same mistake too many other writers have made. You have involved far too many other characters with the mom. Should've just kept it in the family!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Will

I will be her slut. She likes to role play games. We used to do that my husband like to get me to go riding in my car naked, I always told him I hated it but, I loved it, We would play card games and the loser had to do what the other one said to do, I lost a lot mostly because, I do not understand the games he played. Ha Ha

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