by SluttyBabyGirl4u
Your story was concise and arousing. Wished you lived next door
Please use correct punctuation. That would've made this story much better
To the insensitive bastard who wrote your previous comment,why dont you submit a story yoursself!
horrible writing style combined with a lack of plot. Yawn!
This was a poorly written piece with many typos. The rape "fantasy" seems immature and cartoonish and indulges the worst stereotypes since the characters are portrayed as ignorant and unsympathetic.