All Comments on 'Slut Next Door'

by SluttyBabyGirl4u

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DenverMan4FunDenverMan4Funabout 8 years ago
You Turned me On

Your story was concise and arousing. Wished you lived next door

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Please use correct punctuation. That would've made this story much better

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

That was hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
To the first guy:

Your punctuation skills are lacking, smart ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Your story

To the insensitive bastard who wrote your previous comment,why dont you submit a story yoursself!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
ugh

go back to school your writing is terrible.

nightwatcherinenightwatcherineabout 14 years ago
Absolutely lame

horrible writing style combined with a lack of plot. Yawn!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i loved it

mmmmmmmmmmm i loved it wish my neighbor would fuck me like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lame

This was a poorly written piece with many typos. The rape "fantasy" seems immature and cartoonish and indulges the worst stereotypes since the characters are portrayed as ignorant and unsympathetic.

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