by Felixcabin
Because you used a spell checker, I believe that every word that you use is spelled correctly. The bad news is that there are countless examples of the selected word obviously not being the correct word. (It took me a minute to figure out what the hell a 'measurement tap' was. lol) If you don't know anyone that knows how to spell and read better than you, you could submit it to the literotica editors.
But not bad, overall. I'm surprised you didn't have the aunt in on it, though.