All Comments on 'Smalltalking Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I really love your story!

And also really loved your first story! Both are so hot but almost missed the last one because it isn't in Lesbian Sex category. In the future I'll have a closer eye on you.

Hope the next chapter is coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

I really really want you to write the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please continue

Would be a shame if this ended here. Want to hear more about this trio.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This follow-up chapter to the really good first one was disappointing. It starts strong with some believable "morning after" regrets and then just fizzles out. Why the author decided to have the mom character depart halfway through this chapter and the two girls carry on as if nothing had happened was just odd. (Also, the daughter supposedly being stunned at her seeing mother nude comes across as a really jarring continuity error considering the first chapter.)

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