All Comments on 'Smart, Sexy and Submissive'

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Robbb_FangRobbb_Fangalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed reading it. Maybe some more backstory to flesh out her motivations would be nice. The fast pace of the story really help communicate how discombobulated she felt. Personally I enjoy reading the moment to moment sensations though, especially when in a blindfold/hood situation.

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