All Comments on 'Snapshot'

Brothers and sisters have had desires since the beginning of time. Most are denied because of societal norms. Beautiful when circumstances allow them to flourish.

Thank you for the story well worth reading .

This was hot and brought back sweet memories

Of fucking my younger sister! Tho

Mine was a bit different because she seduced me. Long story which I would be glad to share hit me up mastevens001 yahoo

WOW, what an incredible story ! Written so well and certainly is very arousing to the reader as well !! I loke the give and take and how sexy and arousing your story is. This sets a stage for more from the siblings. Brother and sister should get each other aroused w/o handcuffs this time and then have hard sex then another round that is slow and soft. Arouse each other until they cum hard and her brother is deep inside her hot soaked pussy. Please we need more and thanks again !

Wish I was as good as Nick my first time.

The story is OK. This is the first of yours that I've read.

I suggest, before you publish again, find an editor to iron out the tense mismatches, conjugation errors, repetitive adjectives, and quotation mechanics.

Your story could have gone from just OK, to good. Probably not great, because there were too many places that the physics of it just didn't work right. For me, this really detracts from my enjoyment.

There are plenty of (volunteer) editors on this site. I suggest you find one, and then pay careful attention to their suggestions and put effort into improving in those areas.

I think with some extra thought, you could probably come up with some more creative (unique) story line than this story. There's not much there that is that much different from so many of the stories about (sibling) incest.

Great Story! Loved every word! Five stars and favorited!

There is nothing in this story that explains why Michelle broke the barrier of sibling taboo with her younger brother.

From the description of her she should normally be expected to find other and older mates to play with.

I wish I could have given this story 10 stars. It had me on the edge (on my chair??) the entire time. Very well done. Thank you!

You should have made her a virgin also. You still could and expand on the story.

I felt the build-up was fantastic. The unrecognized reciprocal attraction ultimately bursting through made this story excellent. Looking forward to more

WoW what A amazing story & attention to all the realistic details , very believable unlike most . Great job & enjoyable to read.

That teaser about her feet, I was waiting for him to explore more.

Good story. Good dialog.

Gave it 5 stars. But I'd have liked it even better if she'd teased him with her breasts -- extensively -- before he got his hands on them.

Good premise.

But the sex acts are much too rushed. MUCH more detail is needed. Slow progression is needed. JUst saying cock went into pussy and they fucked for a few minutes -- with no more details than that -- simply isn't very erotic.

Four stars -- for potential.

I enjoyed it 4 Stars I have to agree with some of the other commenters that a little more detail would have been nice . Also a little slower pace and I'm not looking for a 12-page story ,I mean it would be nice to get a little more build up , maybe a little bit from her side more because we never really learned anything about how/ why she's wanted it for so long and other than she's watched him jerk off so but very good enjoyed it