All Comments on 'Snatched Away Ch. 01'

Can't wait to read more!

Good noncon stories are rare, but this one is exceptional, and it's smoking hot. Please, TheKey, can we have some more?

You are a very good writer, as you made me get into this story quite strongly :). I got so excited at first when she stood up to him, but then got disappointed when she just gave in, what a loser... Is there any chance that you will continue this story and let her come out on top in the end, where he would acknowledge that forcing submission is not acceptable and he needs to give her real choices, not the rigged ones?

@Nurse_Twisted, there will definitely be more. I actually started in the middle of the story, so there will be more forwards and backwards to the story and characters.

And you never know Geo, might get the upper hand eventually.

She's made out to be caustic, smart and angry, but can't deflect a simple point that he's on fact he has hurt her by destroying her life and instantly turns into a living drooling retard after a single assault. Get real, and don't bother with a second chapter unless you're here to pander to people who will defend even the worst writing

I love dominate men that will go to any length to get the women he chooses. Looking forward to reading more of how he breaks her.

LOVED IT

"Warning, just another Magic Dick story. Don't bother reading." At least the grammar & spelling was correct. Now if only it gains plot development and characters who act consistently ...

Why on earth would you start her off being mad and hating her slave life?

Only to have her loving his cock?

Makes no fucking sense! Please learn how to write a character that isn't going to change their emotions/thoughts within seconds!

Fuck Christ!