All Comments on 'Snatching my Stepsister's Spankies'

by mrsterygor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Could have been better

Needs far more build up got to the sex far to quickly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Unreadable

I stepped forward, yanked down the briefs, and plunged the middle three fingers of my right hand into her pussy.

At this point I stopped reading. It had the beginnings of a decent story but soon became unreadable.

Rabbitman55Rabbitman55about 4 years ago

What woman masturbates in her underwear and then puts the soiled panties back in the drawer with her clean panties? You should have had him going through her hamper if you wanted a dirty pair.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Dudes don't play truth or dare with each other

Maybe girls do but dudes only play in mixed company. Dudes dont care about truth

mrsterygormrsterygorabout 4 years agoAuthor
Reply

Thanks for the feedback. I just wanted it to be a short story so I guess it does feel rushed to that point.

mrsterygormrsterygorabout 4 years agoAuthor
Response to Unreadable

I respectfully disagree and wish you at least finished the story. Oh well.

mrsterygormrsterygorabout 4 years agoAuthor
Reply to Rabbitman55

Fair point. I will consider that for future entries.

mrsterygormrsterygorabout 4 years agoAuthor
Reply to truth and dare

Well the dare part is probably true to some extent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

More please. Love this story

fetishfiend4ufetishfiend4uabout 4 years ago
nice one

need more....want more.... need more... want more...

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Really enjoyed this! Thanks.

mrsterygormrsterygor11 days agoAuthor

Glad to see you enjoyed this story.

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