All Comments on 'Sneak Peek'

equally intriguing.

so much so that I have no clue where you are leading us.

The interweaving of story and story was handled really well, building anticipation as well as playing on reader experience. I might be weird but the strength of Paula's ability to fantasise actual touches isn't strange to me - after all, if a fakir can levitate himself with the power of imagination, a mere soul-crushing orgasm is nothing, right? Great work once again, such a good job of getting into the character's head!