by JadaVersailles
Thanks! It was fun to write!! I like to make these things playful ;)
5 stars for the sex, yeah an extra page of plot would have helped not hurt this one.
don't worry, there is context, but i have to post a ton of chapters before it makes sense! thanks for reading!
This is a fun story! And sexy, too!
I like the sexual tension of Nico playing with Emika while she talks with the ex.
Again, your writing is spot-on, especially the way you describe the full sensory experience…touch, sight, sound, taste and smell! Alongside the emotional hunger, and climactic release!
Also, you explore skin…the physical feature of your characters, in a very erotic way…for example, touching cheekbones…. And playing with the foreskin and crown….beautiful!