by Britease
More is usually better.
The finish doesn’t do the story justice, and seems, somehow, just a bit stupid.
At least 2 bullets, one in the crouch and one in one knee
Do a second one for the wife.
Lame ending. It was riveting, then just nothing. No confrontation. Just planning murder. She has no idea what her husband does. Just ends.
I really hate endings like this one.
pésimo final, daba para mucho
FTDS
One of the lamest stories I have ever read on this site
Pissweak story