All Comments on 'Sniperman'

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kelchakelcha6 months ago

More is usually better.

LanmandragonLanmandragon6 months ago

The finish doesn’t do the story justice, and seems, somehow, just a bit stupid.

Pjam1968Pjam19686 months ago

At least 2 bullets, one in the crouch and one in one knee

RodzzzRodzzz5 months ago

Do a second one for the wife.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lame ending. It was riveting, then just nothing. No confrontation. Just planning murder. She has no idea what her husband does. Just ends.

LechemanLechemanabout 2 months ago

I really hate endings like this one.

prato1992prato199226 days ago

pésimo final, daba para mucho

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

One of the lamest stories I have ever read on this site

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Pissweak story

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