by midwestgent
Loved your story. You are two for two in my opinion. Two stories, two hits, and your poems aren't bad either. Can't wait for your next story - keep them coming author, keep them coming.
Julie sounds incredibly hot...and she swallows on top of being a Goddess. LOL Great writing as usual, with incredible characters and great detail. Please continue the great writing!!!
Midwestgent knows of what he writes...Another fabulous story to take me away from the heat of Florida and wish I could get caught in the snow, every now and again. Thanks for an entertaining read...
Interesting story, well written, no typos or grammar issues. I just wonder why you had the characters as married. It would be fine if both were single and attracted. By making them married, I just wondered the whole time where the issues of cheating were at. Neither seemed concerned in the least, which took away from the story for me.