All Comments on 'Snow Ch. 03'

I just stumbled across this story today and read chapter three and loved it so much I went back and read from the start (I know, naughty). Holy crap! This is so frigging hot. I'm in love with it and it's definitely a new favourite. Thank you so much for such a great read and pleaaasseeee don't leave us hanging too long for the next bit.

PS I can't believe you're a guy. I normally don't enjoy stories written by guys and you did this in first person as the female protag and for real it was brilliant. Yay!

I really enjoyed your writing here, and you have a powerful way of describing scenes and actions. The pacing on the story was very good too.

Best wishes for your future stories.