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by nikki_2021

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HOT!!

Excellent, as usual. You're one of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

once again fantastic, however i would have liked to have read about jack getting to fuck beth, you mentioned a few times that he wanted to, was there a reason why he didnt? Other than that fantastic, love your work

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
Great story

Now thats a ski trip although those naughty girls should have finished each other off a bit better lol. Thanks keep it up:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love your writing

I really have enjoyed your writings. This story I think could have been a little longer and that both girls try a DP. With the one in the back door being the guy who is not her boyfriend. So both guys get to do the girls up the ass. Or ARSE as we keep reading... Arse don't flow off my toung. Ass is better in my book......

I post as Anonymous to protect the innocent.

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Pretty good short read.

Lots of action. I'm not sure but a couple of times one of us got confused about who was doing who how. Not that it really matters. Just wonder some times how far my mind has slipped. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really want a bisexual continuation and an orgy in this story!

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...