All Comments on 'Snow Globe'

by beaugueste

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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 months ago

very good, and erotic

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLabout 2 months ago

Loved your story.

Somehow these two need to reconnect.

Hint Hint, Nudge Nudge!

TomNJaxTomNJaxabout 2 months ago

Excellent story, and I agree with KarenCDFL, these two definitely should reconnect if at all possible, maybe even permanently....Just saying (and hoping :-) )

whackedandflatwhackedandflatabout 2 months ago

Another riveting story Beaugueste and I have finally gotten a glimpse of a literary prize I had been hoping to see for so long. One of your characters taking a creampie. Thank you, darling.

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 2 months ago

Another 5 star perverted story! Wow!

roveroneroveroneabout 2 months ago

LOVED this...both sky -high libidos...! and you paint a great pictures with words... no surprise so many H's

using John's used undershirt 'between my legs to clean leaking cum from my gash' then stuffing into bottom of dirty laundry bag- ...the well-hung BBC trope-both her hands wrapped around PLUS her mouth on the top

'sucking stranger's cock while my bf's suitcase looked on..' ...titty fuck with her big pale D cups...

and Tamara pointing out drop of jazz by her lip...no surprise she didn't want the 'slutty white girl' hugging her..

her bf is real tool, not to be confused with cool tool

easy five and fave, and looking forward to more of redhead/your adventures...

pagrampapagrampaabout 2 months ago

Another great story from Sarah. Great to see she is writing again.

mitchawamitchawaabout 2 months ago

It's an extremely well-written story. The plot is not new but you gave it a different twist. I will not go on about how well the sex scenes were, nor how great was the internal and external dialogue. Some constructive criticisms. On the first page, you mention his cock cumming in her womb, impossible. I like fellatio, but what was he doing while she worshiped his black cock? Why was there no cunnilingus? What is good for the stud is good for the mare. Like most Big Tit stories there was limited attention paid to her breasts, especially the sucking and nibbling. The ending was unexpected, but you left a loophole with the return address.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I absolutely loved it; I read it word for word, putting myself into Sarah's role and enjoyed numerous orgasms of my own. Your descriptions are nothing short of fantastic and extremely demanding. Did I say that I LOVED your story? ((BIG SMILE))

JackiemichelleJackiemichelleabout 2 months ago

Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish their journey and take us where you want them to go. Great story. Please finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Excellent story, couldn’t put it down, even my wife read it and got hot!

da_nigoloda_nigoloabout 2 months ago

Awesome. Very stirring and well-written. Like others have said, a sequel would be great and much anticipated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Sarah goes to New York? A sequel? Damon has a brother? We'd love to hear what happens next!

TenementFunsterTenementFunsterabout 2 months ago

I think you missed out on a funny line-Tamara says, He made you lunch-It looks like you have

a little 'lunch' on your lip.

Enjoyed your erotic tale set deep in the mountains.

5 Stars

Thx for time....

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My name is Sarah. Super busy redhead so-and-so. I'm 5'3, 112, red hair, blue eyes, wear a 32D. Redhead. Biped. Lover of wine, dogs, sleep, reading, The Simpsons, and high heels.