All Comments on 'Snow on the Roof - The Sequel'

This next part of the story is fantastic wait with bated breath for our hero to met with Bernice as find out what slips she has in store for Danny

Wow!! What an installment!! Can't wait for the next installment with Bernice. Great job!!

This is really getting good. I hope you continue it soon.

Just had to say what a great sequal to your first story. The surprise for Kath and then Bernice catching them was brilliant. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

You're storytelling is lusciously comfortable and smoothly evocative. There's not one harsh note or grating misstep that detracts. It's fun to see life taken in stride. Keep it up. I'm keen to learn what comes next.

Very nice and bringing Bernice into it will make for another great story

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