All Comments on 'Snow White'

Very good. Well-written, sexy and amusing.

I had a few real LOL moments reading this. Thanks.

A few minor nits, words like 'vagina' and 'hymen' would never have been used in the time period and 'world' that Snow White is set within. You used plenty others for 'vagina' and 'hymen would almost certainly be better identified as 'maidenhead' especially in this fairy tale. Still, very entertaining.

You know, I like your intent, but the way she's written, 18 for rules reasons, but talking, acting, and incredibly naive like she's MUCH younger than that, especially in the beginning, gives this version of Snow White a very disturbing, underage and pedobear vibe. Went a little too far on the innocence front. Not even knowing she had a pussy, or a clitoris, until 'accidentally' discovering it at eighteen? That's just... a bridge too far, even for a fairy tale.

Yeah, zero chance 'G-spot' would ever be used in a fairy tale, or parody of one, either.

5 stars, I love erotic fairy tales and Snow White was adorable.

Mixed feelings on this one. I like the premise of twisting the most beautiful to the best fuck in the land. But an adult having the mental behaviour of a 11 year old is off putting. Plus there was the potential for so many adventures before the abrupt ending.

Perfect. 5/5. thank you. Keep again. And don't listen to those who teach how to use medieval lexicon--the medievals were more vulgar and more precise than we are, and real women always knew where the G-Spot was, even though they may have given it a more fairy-tale name.

If ever, the anachronism is in the "button" mechanism, hehe. ;)

Many 18-year-olds are naive, inexperienced, and head-in-the-clouds.

how drowl,,,"her one true fuck" lolol,, i liked it, so different,,a hot fairy tale.. well written and all that..