All Comments on 'Snowbound Love Ch. 02'

Over all good story. parts of it did feel rushed and you could have done with out the teasing part because most if not all sexually healthy guys would have not stood for it. You could use a better editor and you could defiantly make more storied with the story line that you have already. A few ideas would be focusing in on the parents as a part and then continue with the twins getting married and the result(s) of their insestuous relations. would they bring their child in once he or she was old enough???? Just lots of possibilities with what you have already to continue if you wished to. But like I said overall a good story.

This is one of the best siblings love story that I have read. Wish there was more.

Are bleeding!!

no guy would accept her teasing, when she got up and locked her self in the bathroom that would end it. after he got dressed he would have gone out side to start cleaning the snow away and stay out there until she could go home. keep it realistic no one lies a tease it just pisses people off and isn't sexy or cute just mean. you should have stuck with your original plan and stopped with chapter one this one sucked big time.

2 bad there isn't a 3rd part

Who cares if you use an editor or not, I enjoyed your stories & I hope you will write more soon.

are you sure you used an editor if so they did a bad job and you better find a better one

It is a good story line but does need a lot of work in the spelling. Like whine instead of wine to name but one of many. Otherwise, it was a good story. Happy Holidays.

Thanks a lot for writing a sequel for us! I loved the build up to end and the playful scenes but the ending was a bit rushed. Please write another chapter! You have the storyline for a whole series! I'm dying to hear how they live together as husband and wife and the result of him fucking his sister when shes not on the pill... ;)

I am glad that you decided to finish this fine story unlike so many authors who do not. I enjoy it very much.