All Comments on 'Snowbound with Mrs Ellis'

brilliant keep them coming

I hope there is more to come.

Your use of the F word ruined this story, and to say it was excessive is being kind...the story could have been interesting, but you lost me......

Well written and fucking entertaining

in response to the comment about the use of the F-word. it was her character. simple as that. i know a woman with that particular trait. or at least i did in a former life. she could turn it on and off. i won't apologise for including it in the story.

You only have to listen to Adele in conversation to realise that - for many, many Britons - the F-word is the adjectival word of choice as an alternative to 'very'.

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There now that feels better

Superb writing. Loved the characters and the profanity was appropriate for Mel's character. I've played with a woman just like her and was shocked at first but slowly csame around and found it a big turn-on. I'm now addicted to dirty talk during sex.

Also love this genre, a filthy 59yo in a position of responsibility behaving so sluttily with a boy young enough to be her grandson. Fabulous, got me very hard.

Every young mans dream !

Great writing . Always enjoy your stories .

don't worry about the F- word. It was a young man dreaming of taking his BOSS. We all have done it before. That why we are different then women, us men love sex and always want more. please work on part 2 great story and some day a great Book gory

Lovely, simply lovey!

enjoyed every word. young man, older woman - has to be everyone's fantasy, doesn't it??

A wonderful British tale! Very well done! I hope you'll bring them back together for more! Thank you!

Very entertaining read good sex too! Thanks for sharing

Great story! Sometimes people overlook the appeal a sexy older woman can have to any male with sense enough to appreciate her. May December romances occur much more frequently in real life than most people would ever believe I suspect. It's always nice to read a well written story that addresses such a romance.

I don't like using the word "hot" because "hot" is used as often as "rare" is used on eBay. In this case I can honestly say you have created a HOT story. It was nice to see how Melanie's demeanor seemed to soften and open-up to Gerard. I also enjoyed Gerard's discomfort morphing into something more.

I'd like to see Gerard develop a more active/aggressive role in a budding relationship while showing the maturity in keeping his position from work apart from his position in bed.

I would at least like to see a New Year's sequel.

Thanks for sharing!

Love it, had my own experience with a woman her age...im only 23.....good lord she taught me allot. It was def worth it. Great job

Clear character uniqueness.

Well organized.

Credible throughout!

Five Gold Ones!

This has the makings of a fine mature romance, with a very sexy twist, very very enjoyable to partake in reading.

Superb