by drtruth
5 stars and 2 cocks up!!! Of course, the "bitch-boy' comment at the end absolutely requires a continuation. Please don't make us wait too long!
YES, I KNOW THERE ARE NO 10 STARS. BUT, ONE HELL'VA STORY.
THANKS.
JERRY
It's just too bad that the author didn't continue with this very good story. I would like to have read that they were snowed in for 3 weeks, which let them get over the taboo feeling about fucking.
By the time they get home, she is late on her period, and having morning sickness. Her flat stomach is starting to show the bulge of a new baby in her belly.
They decide to go back to the cabin for her pregnancy, and delivery of their baby. During the pregnancy she becomes very submissive to him, and he really becomes the head of the family. They decide that their lives need to be even closer, and decide to become husband and wife. Thanks for the good post.......Rich
Loved this story. It is one of your best & hotest stories. Please continue writing more chapters to this story & please do so soon.
It was a good story until you had him tasting his own cum not quite my type of story.
wow you really know how to ruin a story if he likes tasting his cum so much why dont you make it so he is by himself the whole time i couldnt even read past page 3 bad story i dont even want to finish reading it
THis is a most amazing story. The cumsharing is so intimate and lustful. Mommy is so bad . . . in the best way. The ones that are "grossed out", don't knock it if you havent tried it!
Please, is there a part 2?
So all of a sudden at the end she's horrifically mean, calling him bitch-boy? what?
WILL YOU ALWAYS LEAVE YOUR STORIES UNFINISHED. IF SO MANY READERS WILL STOP READING THEM. IT'S NOT NICE TO FOOL WITH THE READERS. A FAN ??????????? LAROC OF AGES
God I love those fairytale incest stories. The setting is beauitful, the slow development is fantastic, characters are nice and the sex is great. It could really need a sequel, no .. it would be nice though.
great first half of a story. Why do all of you guys do this. Do you just get tired of writing? I guess I will have to add you to my growing list of authors that do not know how to finish a story.
I loved the story but I guess the good doctor couldn't handle the truth about what it takes to be a dedicated writer. He was busy in 2008 but lost interest after that leaving this story unfinished! Another one for the "I wonder how it would have ended?" list.
wish you would finish this story it started out awesome keep it up please
And very, very hot! I hope for another chapter of this story someday! Thank you!
another one of your 5 star stories goes begging. I'm really start to wonder if your capable of completing a story. Why bother writing them in the first place it only leaves us poor reader quite FRUSTRATED....
Got a bit boring with him licking and her sucking all the time. I mean to say nearly 5 pages before he FINALLY fucks her for five seconds, come on now. Be a good Bitch - boy finish what you started, for me this story is far from being complete..if your stuck for ideas I suggest you read digdaddyrich comments. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ not for the story but for motivation to finish it...
Leaving from Georgia and driving to Colorado will take 2 days to drive. Your story says they would take just under 4 hours. Obviously you have never driven across U.S.
5 stars but you haven't finished it. Do they continue does he fuck her again. Is she protected or was it the incest that worried her