All Comments on 'Snowflake'

by Autarchic4Ever

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Headguy almost 13 years ago

Terrific!

Appealing characters, deliciously erotic sex scenes, masterful use of the "present" with Alice to bookend the real story. Absolutely no need to for this to continue...but the potential for more with either or both characters is certainly there. Nice Work!

Quantuman almost 13 years ago

Well done!

I love the insistence of not needing labels. Both your descriptive narrative and character development are terrific. Good dialog. The Muse has touched you...