All Comments on 'So I'm Not a Vampire? Ch. 12'

Man I love this series and I honestly love how you've written Peaches - such a beautiful hilarious character - ballsy enough for that kick ass vibe but still ditzy enough I can totally relate - awesome story and can't wait to read more!

A werewolf with a gastric acid problem?

I said werewolf in my previous comment of chp. 11

Do I get a prize or something???

I love your story. I think that it is very well written. It is not like most stories that I have read on literotica. This story is very funny and you can never really predict what is going to happen next. The twists in the story just get me hooked deeper, and deeper into your imaginative story. There is only one thing I would really change. Add more details. One of the things I love about your story is how you get a New chapter every day. All in all I love your story and cannot wait to read what you write next.

for the rest of the story!

from the rate you've been posting, i figure you've already got quite a bit laid out?

i've been thinking . . . werewolf seems a little too obvious. plausible, but . . . i'm not sure it fits. now, i know you aren't strictly following popular rules for supernaturals, but werewolves typically are not undead, and don't spit venom.

honestly, if i put together "venomous" and "furry" . . . the first answer is "spider."

but that's not my final answer. she's probably some kind of demon hybrid or something. or . . . something.

as for bane? obviously was an ancient king/pharaoh/powerful dude . . .but his motive? hmmm . . . he took to Peaches awful quickly. I doubt he lacks true affection for her, but I think he knows/suspects something about her that we don't know yet, and is betting on that in . . . some sort of scheme. what, exactly? i couldn't say.

So, thank you for giving us good puzzles! You're following traditional plot devices just enough we can follow, but not overdoing the foreshadowing or hint-dropping, so we get to have some fun! weeeee.

Awh! I'm so glad you all liked the story. I'm writing the second one right now. I love your guesses, they're very funny, but it might take you a bit longer to figure out what she is. :)

I hope you all will join Peaches and Bane on their next adventure, and if you want more information or updates check out my profile page! Thank you all so much for reading, and the next book will be done in a week or two.

Best

Rosi

wish the chapters were longer though. you keep me intrigued, cringing, and laughing all at the same time. bravo!

Spider! I think she's some sort of spider woman.

I quite enjoyed this. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but the story managed to whisk me right past them, which is an unusual accomplishment. I look forward to the subsequent stories.

lmao I need me some more of that Peaches!! She is the most original character I have read about, and I have read A Lot of lit. books. SOOOO I love your writting skillz, they are mad stellar. Keep up the series we love it!!

Are any of the other three books available to be read?

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Don't stop now. This is too addictive. Gotta have my peaches.

So, Anonymous - not to be mistaken for Anonymous, Anonymous, Anonymous, Anonymous or myself - you may well be right about Peaches being a spider creature. I would suggest that she's a ghoul, myself, but I'm really not sure if there is any known mythical creature with her powers. Could it be that she's a chihuahuahua...isk? Eh, perhaps we'll find out some time.

In seriousness, though, that description reminds me of the voodoo pufferfish bad guy in the TV show Grimm. He spit a mind-controlling substance, though, and had spines on his face, not black hair on his arms. Anyone what to guess what kind of Wesen she is? :P

Of the crop!

I loved it so far. When can we expect books 2, 3, and 4?

So, no. No one has guessed what she is. But if you want to continue reading the stories, they're all on amazon. First one (this one) is free!

Message me if you have question! Thanks for reading!

RSP

You have got to write more about Peaches!

I really, really, really love this story!! I tried looking for it & the rest of the books on Amazon but can't find them. Can someone help me please?

Why on earth end the story there? How about MAYBE getting to the point and actually telling us just wtf she is?

Go to sensanin's user page, the rest of the stories are there