All Comments on 'So You Want'

I love it :D I think it ended perfectly was very clever and such a good description of how I feel and many other submissive females may do so. You write beautifully and I could almost hear her voice in the background. Amazing!

I agree with anon. This was quite original and refreshing. Too many D/s stories get wrapped up in mechanics and physicality, and neglect the powerful emotions that D/s unleashes inside our heads -- not this one.

I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

As a submissive, I thought this was very eloquent and such a good depiction of what I myself am looking for currently. I really appreciate you sharing.

Deserves a ch2.

This was a little different, and i wasn't sure it would be well received. I will think about a chapter 2, maybe from Damien's point of view? :)

Once again, there is a subtle something here that is delectable and fine. The "backstory" is the conversations many that must have led to this moment at table, a first meeting that prompted you to such creative honesty. Remember in "Tootsie" when Hoffman gives back to Jessica Lange exactly what she asked for in "girl talk" and she throws her drink in his face? This is the counterpoint to that moment. It is a soliloquy in the best sense but with the courage to present it to the man about whom it seems to be, at least in potential. It steps two forward and then retreats, taking back a little and correcting, letting the logic and the heart appear in the process, as the process, as it proceeds. It is amazing for a submissive woman to have these words and the wherewithal to articulate these ideas with aplomb...if it happened in real life, you are an astonishing woman and if not, then you are merely an astonishing writer. Well done!

Bravo.

A well written story, I've read it several times, and each time I find another facet to ponder on.

Stating your needs candidly, is always the best policy, and leads to a far more fulfilling relationship, but sadly, so many aren't as honest with their desires, mores the pity!

Thank you Cinnamon_Tart.

The brevity of your work is amazing given how each of your stories has presented a different aspect of a submissive issues. Nicely done. Given the interval between the request for the other person's vantage point of this story and the years past I guess we will need to be satisfied with what we have already received