All Comments on 'Soccer Moms Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great continuation

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillabout 2 years ago

Really good story. Hope you continue with Carol's saga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I understand this has to end sometime, don't leave us hanging though.

spiegelmuisspiegelmuisabout 2 years ago

I came to appreciate Carol more and more, even though she lacks maybe self-esteem, she's straightforward, open and embraces opportunities. The talk with their daughters about her sexual lifestyle and now again with Abi surprised me (not the first time she surprised me), and as I'm someones daughter myself, this talk is maybe what unusual but it feels very liberating at the same time. By now I can see a common thread in this story, or where it is heading too. Before I wasn't even sure where the story was going, like how it is in life itself. Situations, actions from others can make everything questionable in a relationship or make it changes in a single moment and we can't do much than accepting it. (or asking for clarity, but even then) Although I have a certain expectation now, I have no clue how she will get there, what it would look like and if it will make her happy and right now it feels almost unthinkable. So much has happend already, let's see what en who will remain important.

The story in general keeps me hooked, the sex scenes are for me a plus. Mostly very factual & realistically described, it's nice to see how it built up & how Carol perceived it, but only in a few stories was I really touched by it. (even with all the different people or sex positions, or maybe because of that). I can't quite say what it is or how you can keep some more flow / tension in it, not sure if others have a different opinion about that.

Still my favourite series at the moment, 5 Stars, because I love this journey! Keep writing & posting, looking forward what will happen next!

Nicole2023Nicole202310 months ago

I should be sleep but I want to finish this section

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I am submitting the "Soccer Women" stories now. This is the continuation of both the "Soccer Moms" and the "Soccer Girls" storylines. It is just that now they will stay more in sequence from here until the end.

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