All Comments on 'Softly'

Thank you for this,

Every human, m and f, can take spmething from this and use it.

Kilroy

read thru this flash story belongs everywhere except may be gay. Put it in LW-make little sense.

Sounds like the "Girlfriend Experience" to me. I wonder how much it cost?

Well written and erotic. I guess the kind of low score reflects it being in the wrong cat?

Well written and hot. I don't understand the low score.

Perhaps Erotic or Romance would have been a better place, thanks.

Not LW, unless they're married, or she's cheating on her husband, there's no mention of what they are to each other. Would be better in erotic or maybe romance. I gave it 5*.

Good writing. I would have given it a five but you lost one for wrong category. LW is already a dumping ground for every story that the author wants read.

Some very strong descriptive writing in this short erotica. I gave it a deserved '5' Look forward to reading more of your work.

There are THREE (3) very universal comments made in this account! The sex is DESCRIBED very well, but WHO are the people engaged in the sex? The reader has almost NOTHING to acquaint him or her with the participants!

Remarkable STERILE, to be in an erotica site!

3*

Gave me a "stiffy."

Wrong category, great vignette!

Not a thing wrong with this one.