All Comments on 'Solace'

Definitely a five plus story that drug the reader along its emotional path. Yet that emotional path leads to the only constructive criticism that I can offer. I feel like the constant shift in the timeline lessened the readers immersion into the story.

Still 5's though.

What an emotional story. Beautiful and dark in places and loving in others. Thanks for your time and imagination.

But well imagined and realized. Hope you keep at it.

Couldn't get far, about p3. Is this two stories zipping back and forth In time and story?

Seems you got lost yourself as to whether it was past or present and mixed in now and then as then and now.

Not sure how experienced you are at writing, didn't check, but you need to be very tight trying to write two concurrent stories. Not enough just to add in now or years ago.

What a story. Really tugged at my emotions. Like other comments the many switches in time detracted from the story but overall I loved it.

Easily one of the best stories I have ever read.

Thank you for sharing.

It pulls your emotions from within and drops reality in front of you.

Very well written..

Sad story at the end, but also hope!!!! Well done!!!

So wish these tearjerker stories came with tissue warning