All Comments on 'Soldiering to Union'

Hi I liked the way you let the story build to a" Climax"

good first story keep writting

good build-up before the banging. Realistic ending too. Good luck & keep writing!

You have a talent. of building suspense. Great writing, just need attention to a few grammatical rules, but they didn't interrupt the flow. Good character definition, and, if the mar of a good erotic story is to arouse, you have done that. Keep writing and let us know how these two make out.

A very nice flow to it. It had good solid characters,was erotic and so very real.

Great lead story