All Comments on 'Soldiers of Darkness Ch. 04'

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Anonymous22 days ago

This is good, just...it's almost not corruption when it's so easy? The way Red and Blue crumbled in literal seconds makes all the magic feel like overkill. They would have succumbed if the Queen had just mailed them a dildo in a box.

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I write under the pen name 'Caroline Waters.' All of my other works can be found on Amazon and KDP. I'm a fan of mind control in general, but not standard hypnosis as the means of control. Magical? Science Fiction? Squicky? Any of those float my boat. Throw in corsets? Latex?...

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