All Comments on 'Solitaire'

Editor, editor where are you. This story needs one super bad with the grade school level grammer. There are several sentences and paragraphs the end with no punctuation or with , or ; which isn't even grade school level grammer.

Send this kind of stuff back to the author for a full overhaul before posting.

Jesus, talk about pots and kettles. Grade school 'anonymous' can't spell 'grammar' and s/he is criticising you!

But s/he does have a point nontheless, you could do with an editor.

I feel sorry for those who think they are God and know everything & even know how to spell.!! Bless you both.!! LOL. I read a story to enjoy the "story" but so many want to down people - but yet you don't see them writing.!! Wonder why.?? He got a '5' & a 100 from me as I really enjoyed the story he wrote.!! (i know i don't write good - so sue me.) Thanks.