All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 01'

This is a well developed story. Hot as hell too.

I can't wait to read about the pussy eating lessons and home life!

next chapter please

Bring on more chapters.

5 stars and hope for many more chapters.

Enjoyed this tale

Scores 4/5

Great premise, but the sex was skimmed over quite a bit. Hope it's more fleshed out in following chapters.

Loved it. Hoping the following chapters the sex will be a little more in-depth and not so rushed.

The song God of Thunder by KISS kept running through my head while reading this.

more please asap.

. . . I’m not Greek

One of the best story description till now

I do NOT read d/d 1 star

Having any woman, anytime is absofuckinlutly outstanding. Probably die of a heart attack, but it would take the undertaker 6 weeks to get the smile off my face. 😁😁

Great story, looking forward to reading more.

That was wild and a little crazy. It almost feels like they are reincarnated Greek gods.

Too weird!

Hell of a fantasy! Wouldn’t you love some of the elixir that lets you cum for 12+ hours!

5* for dreaming up this fantasy. Very creative!

Cheers

SAGE

Great idea. Good beginning. Can't wait to read him fucking his mother with his father. Maybe the same with sisters.

Pretty good story but your descriptions of the actions are almost non existent. You need to paint more of a picture. I have no idea what anyone's body or face looks like other that hot or beautiful. Also describe the sex acts more and draw them out for longer. Saying that MC inserted himself moved around a bit and was done is lame.

damn you made me nut thanks 100% HOT

trashy chapter 1 STAR

Dear Anonymous

Trashy, useless review 0 STAR

LOL, he is not, if dad fucks daughters how did he become master. You don't even know the concept of BDSM.

Would have been better if the Dad got taken out of the picture....never been fond of the whole “sharing” thing. If he’s supposed to be the Master then they should be only his.

I like the concept and generally enjoyed this chapter. I thought that the son may have been more reluctant to go with the rest of the family and would probably had plans of his own for his 18th birthday. It would have been interesting to see how the family would persuade him to join them. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

I’ve read this series before (6 months ago) and still enjoy it. Gave you 4* before and gladly found I could change it. Still bothered by the anonymous morons to chicken-shit to use their real names when slamming the author. Too funny they still read it all. Just minor spelling, but hell, my Bachelors and Masters was English and English Literature and I still require Spell Checker of MicroSoft Office. But check Greek mythology Nd history and one would find orgies and different sexualities abound back then and still do. I’m old enough to recall the slang for anal sex was not just poop-chute slamming, it was doing ghe Greek. Fabulous story Doc

Keep coming back to this story, excellent concept

Just ruined the full mood of dad's involvement. Sick

Great story, keep up the good work and don't listen to toxic negative reviews.

Is the character in this chapter named Angelina actually supposed to be Alexandra?

No

The Anonymous who wrote "Sick...I did NOT read//dd 1 star" How stupid can you get??...If you didn't read the fucking story how the fuck can you say it was "sick"??? Idiot

Nope, sorry...you folks that do not want to accept this story for what it is...A STORY...then move along to something else and leave the rest of us to ENJOY this fable of nastiness...

Yeah, it is nasty, but in a good way...even if Alexander keeps asking if he can mount his mother, or any other female, even at the breakfast table. This kid REALLY needs to learn, on a steep learning curve, on how to be extra-respectful to the ladies HE IS RESPONSIBLE FOR!! He has been told this, he needs to pay attention to this. "NAILING" his mother, or any other woman, will get him a BBBAAAAAADDDDD reputation...

AND, I will quit reading this series...👿😱

(2/4/2022) This was entertaining; very hedonistic. But it all seemed rushed and I dare say, unexciting, bland, IMO. I would have enjoyed some detail instead of stating that a sexual act had been or was being done to someone at a given time. There’s only a minimum of emotional connection between the characters, IMO. I’ve never been a fan of sharing or having daddy involved; unless he was the main protagonist of the narrative. But because of how a matter of factly it was presented it didn’t affect me one way or the other. Why should I root for Alex? Why should I care? Everything has been handed to him on a silver platter. His training isn’t something to look forward to reading if there is no physical and emotional detail to what he would be learning, IMO. I had to rate this narrative as average.

1/5. This story sucks. I have no feelings for Alex. As @mrdata9770 put it, it was very, very rushed. It adds no detail. Plus, this kid has never had incest before, and he doesn't have any mixed feelings about his mother riding him. His mother literally disrobes and he's like, 'I don't care' and fucks her brains out like it's nothing! He's one of the least relatable characters I have ever read about on all of Lirerotica. The plot would be good if Alex actually acted like a normal person, you added detail, and you at least tried to make it realistic. 1 out of 5 stars.

Awesome story!!

Could have been better

Psychologically improbable even if there is lots and lots of sex.

3*

BJ

Could not finish it. The first page was time i can get back

Wild i can only imagine what will happen over the next few chapters

it is the best i have read so far. from Ray

Wish I was in that family.

Sorry, dont like this story.

- Son starts drinking weird elixirs without questioning.

- Son doesnt mind fucking his mother without even questioning it a bit. But I guess he's drugged.

- all married women are cuckolding their husbands/ Hi darling stay home, I'm gonna get impregnated by my cousin. Must be a lot of divorces in the family.

- going through the little descriptions for each chapter this looks like a cheap and lousy way to get sonny 20+ women. This allows for what i'm sure will be zillions of stroke stories coming on. Even to the next generation.

I rated 2 stars for this, and wont read any further (and certainly wont rate any)

Now if son would have had some balls and refused the ritual....

That would have been a nice story (with a bad ending I guess:)

But this is Literotica. Still looking for a story where the protagonist says NO. (need some pointers here:)

WOW !!! Absolutely entertaining from beginning to end. I wish I was Greek and member of this family. There was suspense with the poor boy not knowing what is in store for him and what a happy ending ! Them Greeks know how to party. I've read stories on Lit for fun and some humour. You the author have nailed it in this first chapter. Glad to see there are many chapters following and will be busy this week reading them ... much better than watching all the crap on TV. Voted 5 stars for this first chapter ... well written. OPA !!!

Hate it.