All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 02'

Love it keep it going! dont make us wait too long for chapter 3

This is an excellent story. I go hope you will continue it. The characters development in this is very good. Clearly Alex has an emotional connection to Alexandra. You need to explore that further.

cant wait for more.

A really thought out story.

I'd like to see where you got your ideas from, but I'm really into it.

Please, keep it going.

Hopefully you will do another soon

Great loving this series, hanging out for more.

Very well written. Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Very good story, entertaining story line for sure.

Thumbs up on this series. Alex should mega claim Di for himself, breed her and pump out as many pure Gods as they can.

Please do a chapter 3 for this soon

Just marvelous, we loved ever word. Keep up the great work , we can't wait to see what's next.

I now grasp the scree name play. You are an exceptional writer and especially the ceremonial aspect of the plot of your stories. Coming from a 22 year military career, the pomp and circumstance of your plot is extremely easy to follow. 5* and would change the first submission if I could. More please

Very smart, using a twist on the old greek gods. I look forward to your further chapters for this story line. One minor nit-pick, the fact that Alex seems clueless about all of this is a bit hard to swallow (no pun intended). Given that they are basically the 'royalty' then Alex should have already been schooled in much of what was to happen. Even his sisters were brought into to it at age 16.

But I look forward to the rest of your chapters.

you made me nut thanks a lot bro 100% HOT

@booty77lover - I’ve never met you. I think you and the story did that.

I don't really get into the Mother/Son stuff. It's actually a turn off for me. But I enjoyed reading about how his two sisters are going to become his future wives. The love making between Alex and Alexandria was really good too. I'm hoping that he can take her as his third wife as well. I'd like to see her fall for him and fall hard.

Excellent story, following it very well, and it is nice to see Alex is becoming more respectful in his dealings with his 'subject's, especially when he paid the wonderful compliment he gave to the young lady when she was done...and Mom was right there to support him, bolstering his growth as the "E'Papas"

On to Chapter 3...and, all of the story is well written; glad Alex is not into guys...

(2/4/2022) This chapter was better than the first. I liked the emotional connection Alex had with Alexandra. Alex becoming close to one of the available women would enhance the narrative, IMO; Alexandra or maybe one of his brides. This narrative seems to flow at an even pace with little quick interesting blips. It would have been better to submit these two chapters as one with more detail in most interactions, IMO. His shaving by his sisters was a lost opportunity, IMO. I liked this chapter so I rated it four stars.

What a great series. I really like the compassion and respect he shows for the women that come to him. ;-p

I have no idea why anyone would bitch about this story. I thought that so far, it has been very well written. Great story line with much respect shown to the women. I know I could not do better so I just shut up and enjoy! Five stars

The Mamas & The Papas, perfect name inside a group sex story.

Dang, a guys dream.