All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 02'

I have no words!! it's the best story I've ever read in a long time. You're so talented. The chemistry between them is absolutely incredible, thanks a lot.

Just wonderful!!!

Well done. Great character development. Great build up. Great sex. You are have talent.

I loved every bit of it. Great story!

Don't stop writing...

Just... don't! =)

It's so easy to get lost in this story.

Sarah

So hot and sexy and romantic and cute. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Another great chapter.

Your dialog and your characters are so believable. Fantastic job. Thank you for sharing your talents.

i enjoyed the premise of the story but when you got to the sexual scenes your dialogue was very similar to your Tide series. takes away from the quality of the story

Your characters have too many traits in common! in all your stories the woman is either insecure or something. The man always says sweatheart. The man is always very fit, and in all stories the characters have a bad past. I think your losing your touch, honey. Everytime one character got into deeper description, I kept finding WAY too many similarities. I love your work, but your originality is going down with each new story I read from you, dear.

~Concerened regular on Lit

<br>I tried really hard to ignore that last comment, but I guess I'm just not that tough (or sensible).</br>

<br><i>Solstice</i> was actually the first story I published on Lit, so I guess what you're really saying, <i>Anonymous in Everywhere and no where</I>, is that my later stories went downhill? </br>

<br>I'm sorry that all my female characters are insecure. I s'pose they're all versions of me, LOL. As for the men all being fit, well, I guess that's why these stories are erotica. <i>Fantasy</i>. It's funny how it's okay for the women in erotic stories all to be blonde, have massive jugs and neatly shaven havens but that men have to be ordinary beings... </br>

<br>It got me thinking though. I am trying to conjure up a plot where the man has a beer belly, a hairy back and yellowing toenails - but it could be tricky making the scene romantically erotic. ;-)</br>

<br>Though you are of course right that there are many similarities between certain aspects of my stories. Odd though this might sound, I didn't actually notice how similar some bits are in later stories until months after I'd posted them. It is something I will work on - that is, when I finally regain the impetus to write. Right now, I'm going through a rather rocky patch where it feels as though everything I write is crap - a view that is only enhanced by receiving helpful comments such as yours with its accompanying zero.</br>

<br>Anyway, I thank you for your comment just the same. I don't suppose you'll ever read this response but that's okay. At least I've had the chance to get it off my 36DD chest. :D </br>

<br>Lily</br>

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I think perhaps some of your readers who've chosen to leave negative comments have never been introduced to any good books. Your stories are great! You have quite a talent for developing your characters and giving them a decent plotline to boot! Those who comment that your characters are too similar, I ask them to find a writer who has written several books and all of their characters are completely different...it's just not going to happen. The characters that are the most well written are done so because the writer brought them out from a familiar place! (i.e, themselves or someone they know)

So I say, pay no attention to those who know not what they speak (or write)....you're a great writer! If you're ever published proper, I'd buy everything you write.

There are so many stories on this site that are below average, I can't understand why an earlier commenter complained about your characters being similar in other stories. So what? Your story unfolded beautifully, and the imagery is great. Lovely--romantic--and well-written. I'd give it a rating of more than 100, if I could.

You've gone and done it AGAIN. I didn't think Matt could be topped, but you made delicious Tosser Foster and now yummy Adam. You're a delight!

-Dixie

You are a great writer. Coming from a fellow Brit it's nice to read language that hasn't been americanised!

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Superb in the whole series so far. Few idiosyncrasies and such are requisite to painting real life once u have Hinted or set the background. Otherwise people that are not sexually in tune with you would be texting "Nobody would say that . . in England". . As the metaphors always give away Uni focussed writers engaging less fortunates in clumsy or forceful acts. .as tho there is a typical class element in forced or clumsy sex, similarly. The whole series is fantastic, making real an unlikely, but I dare guess often wished for, chain of events. .keep the hotel dinner and scenary in mind Boys. .

Brilliant, and should one find my english a bit 'crass', Uve missed a point. Comprehension, and consistency should be the only parameters in text sex land. Yes, I have letters after my name. One note, this lady has moved on well, for general readers/new writers. In passion generally, especially on a 'first' basis, six word phrases might go through your head, but all that comes out of your mouth is 3, or 2, or single expletive. And no that does not mean such scenes should become short crude banality. . the thoughts and inner feelings always lifts the portrayal of such events. . and allows impact . . to do its dirty Work!

I know what they went through. They both needed it and your description made it all the more interesting and erotic. I think Adam and Emma deserve each other.

Like sipping a good Scotch... I have to agree that your female protagonists sound the same, but since I fell in love with them, that is no longer a defect...

I love how comfortable they are with each other. Combine that with excellent descriptions and I can't tear myself away!

second time of this story and i'd forgotten how amazing it is!

That had to be one of the hottest love scenes I've read in a long time. It was so beautiful, so gentle, so loving, so passionate! Simply amazing!

I particularly like how natural they feel with each other.

You went beyond the obvious A, B, Cs....and made it feel uneven, and normal.

Nice work, Lily!

Excellent, I enjoy it very much.

erotic, sensual, sexy, titillating, fun.

fwiw, I love that your characters are "normal" and are ok to have insecurities. that is in part, what endears them to us, the readers.

oh, and I am glad he finally learned her name. lol

I have no other words to add to that. Lovely.

Very fun read, to soar and laugh with this adorable couple.

J

long, smiling breath out. That was simply lovely.

J