All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 04'

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Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 3 years ago
Marvelous

Great chapter I goofed hit 4* should have been a 5 my apologies for that. Please continue this is getting really good

PerveratheartPerveratheartover 3 years ago
Love this series

You have done an amazing job with this series I look forward to much more.

laughdruidlaughdruidover 3 years ago
Love It

I really enjoy this story and am looking for many more chapters.

tallman441tallman441over 3 years ago

I love this story. Can't wait to figure out what Alexandra's role is in all this. 5 stars from me.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Not normally a fan of fantasy erotica but I'm enjoying your story. well done! 5*

mharrisonmharrisonover 3 years ago

Still excellent.

Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Many thanks for sharing with us....

foxylarryfoxylarryover 3 years ago
Love this story!

You've captured the mythology and brought it to the current time. Bravo!

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Great series I can’t imagine the mental gymnastics you went through creating this work! Hopefully it will continue for many more chapters. Enjoying every episode.

5* and keep writing.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PART 5!!!!!

Part 5 part 5 part 5 part 5 part 5

Please please please please

bluerowdybluerowdyover 3 years ago
GREAT STORY

You have updated Greek Mythology and created a great story! Looking forward to more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wooow, Part 5 ASAP please!!!!!!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 3 years ago

This is really thought out.

Enjoying it a lot.

Please, continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Chapter 5,6,7,8,9..... Hurry please this is awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fucking hilarious

Upload the next chapter as soon as you can it's an awesome story I'm looking forward for the next chapter

booty77loverbooty77loverabout 3 years ago

OMG im really injoying this storie 100% hot thanks .

ChemalkaChemalkaalmost 3 years ago

The story keeps getting better and better, and I’m looking forward to coming chapters already. The one thing I don’t get is why mom and both sisters will become the wives of the next e’papas? Alex’ aunt Helena did not become his or his father’s wife after all.

Keep up the excellent work, and we readers will keep enjoying it.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

This story, and it's twist on history/Greek mythology would have driven my college literature professor MAD!! She was really into this stuff, travelled to Greece quite often, even as an older lady...I would really like to be around to get another prof's reaction...SO HILARIOUS!

Alex is maturing well, taking to the education quickly and with a lot of understanding, it seems...DocWords is really spending time developing the background/characters/daily passing...

Alexandra OBVIOUSLY is the candidate for the 3rd daughter...has already been chosen as consort, she and Alex are melding their lives without issue (yet...none I hope!)

Needs a little more editing/proofreading; small errors pop up & distract from the story, just enough to be noticeable when caught...still...**5**STARS!!

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(2/6/2022) Any critique I write here would be redundant. The comments below say it all. But I'd like to say that I was pleasantly surprised. I wasn't expecting this.

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