by PickFiction
Loved the story, it brought back memories from a long time ago. I think you managed to capture the thoughts and emotions of a couple falling in love for the first time.
Excellent story. Definitely needs another chapter, continuing their relationship through college. Keep up the good work!
Good story! Well written and nicely paced. There is definitely room for a Part 2. Please?
I really enjoy 'first time' stories that are written as well as this. Every step of their journey was believable. Excellent writing. Thanks for your effort.
Excellent tale - I like how the parents are part of the story rather than just background. Minor blooper: Diana gives a "long and extended grown". The word you want is "groan"
Great story. Very touching and heartwarming.
Your characters are very well put together. 5stars
Good story. Nice characters and some nice but not over the top sex scenes. 5 stars.
Lovely story, very sweet how the two find each other and learn a lot about life and love together,
Good story but kinda thick on the virtue signaling. I keep waiting for Wade to say "aw shucks". It gets a bit much