All Comments on 'Some Changes in Wade'

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Sidney43Sidney43over 1 year ago

Loved the story, it brought back memories from a long time ago. I think you managed to capture the thoughts and emotions of a couple falling in love for the first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Outstanding!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

will there be a part 2?

Fireguy1956Fireguy1956over 1 year ago

Excellent story. Definitely needs another chapter, continuing their relationship through college. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent down to earth story with real life actions

pcman1950pcman1950over 1 year ago

A halcyon treat.

LitCritLitCritover 1 year ago

Good story! Well written and nicely paced. There is definitely room for a Part 2. Please?

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Part 2! Part 2! Part 2! LOL... 5*

RicknCenFlRicknCenFlover 1 year ago

I really enjoy 'first time' stories that are written as well as this. Every step of their journey was believable. Excellent writing. Thanks for your effort.

hang1022hang1022over 1 year ago

This story could use a 2nd chapter (selfishly wanting to read more :) )

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely a romance! 5-stars

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

Enjoyable romance but is there mord to come?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent tale - I like how the parents are part of the story rather than just background. Minor blooper: Diana gives a "long and extended grown". The word you want is "groan"

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Next chapter please!

Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Great story. Very touching and heartwarming.

Your characters are very well put together. 5stars

daggettdaggettover 1 year ago

Good story. Nice characters and some nice but not over the top sex scenes. 5 stars.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Didn't realize this was a multi-part story? Nice story, so far.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Lovely story, very sweet how the two find each other and learn a lot about life and love together,

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good story but kinda thick on the virtue signaling. I keep waiting for Wade to say "aw shucks". It gets a bit much

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