All Comments on 'Some Neighborly Help'

I liked it a lot and the idea is great. I also was distracted by all of the mistakes, but made it to the end and loved it anyway. It could be really, really great if you had just read it outloud to yourself or had someone else read it over first before submitting it.

I didnt know these stories were being read by English majors. The content was great, story line was hot and I thought, overall, it was some very erotic reading.

Apparently this poor over used fellow has a serious problem. Two sexually hungry women available at the same time. What to do? What to do? Will he be unable to satisfy both? Well ~ somehow he manages to muddle through to the delight of all.

Darn it! I got too caught up in this story to look for spelling errors. Don't worry Writer ~ you'll do better next time when you use spell check. Hot story! Fun Read!

Thoroughly enjoyed this - and the closing line made me crack up!

Put a collar on both, marry amy, impregnate Jen! A real loving family, Jen makes a good switch, Amy wasnt a bad one herself. To sad the Master has to be led around on a leash by his two subs! A great story.

could help. Simple spellchecking won't fix some of the problems here, e.g.:

"... Fun, but defiantly a little nuts." (definitely, not defiantly!)

Otherwise, it was a fun, original and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Sounds perfect!

Tess

Loved this story, I was expecting the girls to have set this up, both knowing what the other liked, but nice story.