All Comments on 'Some Privacy Please?'

Great writing. Only complaint is that I’d like to read a longer version of it.

Well done and thank you.

Nice. I liked your first story. Quite a few typos that were a little distracting. Not everybody needs exaggerated body part sizes to make an enjoyable story.

Enjoyed. I hope you continue.

Good, hope you keep it going.

Very good first story, I hope this continues into something more.

There were plenty of typos and grammar problems, but it happens to a lot of first time writers here.

4-stars.

A nice stroker.

Seems like 1/2 a story. Good start though.

Nice but I just wish you described her pussy more and her peeing.

Not bad. Please get someone to proofread it for you next time. I know it's a small detail, but the sink you were talking about isn't spelled sync. Things like that can be caught before posting just by having a new set of eyes looking at it. Keep it up though.

Enjoyed it, hope there is more soon.

Pat 2 please

More please!!!!!!!

You need a proofreader, bud.

Yes, proof reading essential. Kitchen sync? Mother's read hair? Full mass? Otherwise, a nice story. Bravo DAR 2792. Don't be put off by us critics ;)

More please.

I've been reading incest since1974 and this is equal to any. An amazing story of love that explores the inner thoughts/actions when taboo transforms from covert to overt.

Best story I've read in a long time!

This was a fantastic read. Hope that you will continue with this story.

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story. Needs a continuation. Maybe one where mom gets what she needs. 5🌟