by JANAMARIE
You have the uncanny ability to make the sex scenes so realistic a reader can imagine themself right there in the middle of it.. You do this without the usual wham bam thank you mam type of sex we see so often here.
Please keep up the great work
This story goes far beyond the usual drivel we see on these pages. The warmth (and yes SEX) makes it one I shall long remember.
Please keep it up
Charles
The story was so wonderful, but the part of losing Sara was a heartbreaker. That was such a key part to the early story. I am also sorry we never met the guy in her life. I hope they can mend those wounds in the future. Her and Bob were so close, it is a shame to lose that now.
This and Chapter 1 are unbelievable pieces of literature. They are miles away from the usual wham bam thank you mam type of sex stories on these pages. You have the ability of bringng the reader into the story and as sentimental as this one is of perhaps even bringing a tear or two out of them PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
I actually cried when she lost the baby... your stories have a way of pulling me right into them ( and I have read them all ) PLZ keep up the good work. Also let me know if you ever get into a Sci-Fi or Fantasy story. I have a feeling that you would be great in those genres.
This was a cute story up until the end, So sad for their son!! And the parents, too.