All Comments on 'Someone Borrowed, Someone Blue Ch. 03'

Great chapter!

5

The story is clever, well-written, and full of little surprises. It is like a super romance, all the little things that make a romance special played subtly again and again. How do I know I like it so much? I am literally aching for the next chapter. Mark the author as one to follow!

The Hoary Cleric, a guest at Literotica

Now icy stripes; did you put fratricide in there to see if we were paying attention? maybe patricide or at a squeeze parricide? well anyway I was paying attention so twenty brownie points for me?

Love your style of scribe and you imagination is superb.

@2Maria Would love to claim that it was just a clever ploy but nope, I wrote the wrong one and missed it on edit. Mea culpa!

Really enjoying this story!

Loved this, the story, the characters, the humor, the writer's voice! Can't wait for more...

Thanks for a great storyline. Can’t wait for your continuation. Really enjoying your talent

I can tell this is going to be one of those stories that i hate - I wish that they would come out quicker because its an incredible story, but if it comes out quicker then the quality will suffer. I'm already hooked enough to read them as they come out, so i'll be 'forced' to reread them all as each chapter comes out. Purely to understand how the new chapter fits in with the existing ones, you understand.

Really enjoying this story keep up the great work