by icestripes
GREAT STORY!!! Well done. More please. You're a fantastic writer. One of the best. Keep up the good work.
loved the story, beautiful romance Made me wish that Ted was Dorothy or Theodore was Theodora then i would have done unspeakable things while reading this story
My hat is off to you. Nicely done. As mentioned previously, the inner dialogue was well done.
I’m not a writer so I don’t have the words to express how great I think this story is. I will say that it’s the best damn thing I’ve read on Lit. in years. I didn’t comment after each chapter so I’ll do it now. I loved this story from the get-go. The banter, the flirting, painful yearning. Not to mention the great story line, the great writing, oh, and the way you stretched this story but kept my interest all the way through. So thanks, icestripes, for a great read. I’m generally not this long-winded but I guess this story just brought it out in me. Five stars.