by BillyBobJoeEd
wow,this story is amazing!well written,provides a perfect illistrationfor the mind...and just wow.
Why aren't they really married?
No biology shared between them....
The effort to establish the characters' relationship was very good. It just seems like there could have been more of a payoff in the sex action at the end. It would have been nice to read much more details and about more than a single night of action.
Good writing though!
It was very romantic, not really my thing, but it was a beautiful story,
Thank You
YOU ARE MY FAVORITE WRITER NOW.IT WAS PERFECT, SENSUAL, HEARTBREAKING, CARING, BEAUTIFULLY EROTIC. MY EMOTIONS ARE RAW.I WOULDNT CHANGE A WORD, THANKS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL TRIP YOU TOOK ME ON 10 ISNT EVEN ENOUGH FOR MY SCORE. WILL BE LOOKING UP YOUR STORIES.