All Comments on 'Someone to Watch Over Me'

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Krazy_Passion_KingKrazy_Passion_Kingover 13 years ago
Incredible

wow,this story is amazing!well written,provides a perfect illistrationfor the mind...and just wow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good read.

Why aren't they really married?

No biology shared between them....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Appreciate the effort

The effort to establish the characters' relationship was very good. It just seems like there could have been more of a payoff in the sex action at the end. It would have been nice to read much more details and about more than a single night of action.

Good writing though!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Story

It was very romantic, not really my thing, but it was a beautiful story,

Thank You

OleguyOleguyover 11 years ago
You are an AUTHOR.

Love your work that I only just discovered.

5 *

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
TOTALLY BEAUTIFUL

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE WRITER NOW.IT WAS PERFECT, SENSUAL, HEARTBREAKING, CARING, BEAUTIFULLY EROTIC. MY EMOTIONS ARE RAW.I WOULDNT CHANGE A WORD, THANKS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL TRIP YOU TOOK ME ON 10 ISNT EVEN ENOUGH FOR MY SCORE. WILL BE LOOKING UP YOUR STORIES.

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