All Comments on 'Someone Will Come'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

I have always liked your stories. I liked this one and hoped you might continue it, but it seems like it is at an end. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Last but one paragraph.

Angela??

Who is Angela?

Previously the Ex's name appeared to be 'Andrea'!

oggbashanoggbashanover 3 years agoAuthor

Anglea? Oops -my most frequent mistake. She was Angela and changed to Andrea but I didn't go far enough with find/replace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
always a sign of a good writer.....

when they cant remember the name of a main character, in a two page, three character story.

bwaahh hahh hahhh

HragsHragsover 3 years ago

Great story......Hope u continue this series with more chapters.....

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Great story a second chapter would be nice. Well Done 5 stars

sg1010sg10107 months ago

Thank You !

I thoroughly enjoyed your creation !

Best Wishes !

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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