All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 11'

A very nice way to come back after time away. Thank you for continuing this story!

I’ve kept checking back, hoping you’d continue. Thanks...

i am very glad that you start to udpate this story again this is my favorite

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Thanks for reading!

I'm really loving this series and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reached a new level of debauchery with this chapter. love it!

I really think rawlyrawls work is in the top 10 on Literotica!! I was so enamored with his stories I could not wait for them to show up on Literotica. I subscribe and you get immediate access to whatever he's working on.

Just do it!!

“Widening gyre”!?!

I love a Yeats reference.

A cum-dimmer tide is loosed!

Linda is giving me vibes similar to the old religious lady from the movie The Mist.

5 🌟 for the story

Very hoooootttttt!!!! Well now most of the women have got cum in their pussies, except for a few. Donna finally got it in this chapter. When is Suzy, Sally, Wendy the preacher's wife and Dr. Cobb going to get it? Great stuff. 5 stars. Only one discordant note: "Mark idly wondered if she was......on a clandestine triste." It's tryst not triste. Triste is French for sad, sorrowful, melancholy.