All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 16'

One of Roys better chapters. I wish that the teacher scene was itself a chapter. After this is finished you might consider a chapter 15 B of how all the teachers were captured.

Better yet Rawl would you consider a school themed new story of a student taking over his school? Cheerleaders, teachers, principal, parents of students etc.

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Love the 3 generational fuck fest! Love the level of depravity

Great chapter. Love the Patrick and Suzy storyline. Hopefully we see what happens with Addy!

I like Roy

Can you please post more than 2 pages? Great series

I know you've got other work and all but it like a girl finishing and walking off before you're done:P I'd like to know how annie stayed unaffected while dating another teenage boy for so long.

Love the Patrick story line. Am done with Roy. Hoping he is killed off soon